Wednesday, 13 February 2013

Alligator teritory

Source:National geographic wallpapers




The murky water swarming with alligators,ready for a slimy fish for a snack.Twitching on movement, there rough scaly skin rubbing on each other.The grey water waving in the calm breeze. Legs moving the water. Pointy tips on there skin and super sharp teeth make this animal one of the ultimate killers!




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4 comments:

  1. Room 3 NCS13 February 2013 at 19:13

    Your description of the alligator is great Nico, and the photo you chose is fantastic!
    Mum

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  2. Pete20 February 2013 at 12:30

    Great writing very descriptive :)

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  3. Fiona6 March 2013 at 09:55

    Wow Nico, I loved reading your short piece on the alligators. What a great writer you are. I can tell you will entertain me with your writing this year! Keep it up!
    My favourite sentence is, "The grey water waving in the calm breeze." Do you know why?

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  4. jamie27 March 2013 at 18:38

    cool blog jamie

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